All Comments on 'Under the Raven's Wings'

This was a wonderfully satisfying story! My only complaint being that it was too short. I love these paranormal stories, especially the inherent sensuality of vampire stories. Thank you for sharing with us.

Has the feel/flow of a sonata or maybe a poem.

I agree with Fukmi about the flow. Yeah, I would have loved to read chapters and chapters but short worked for how this was written. It really hit you right between the eyes. Loved it :)

the only thing that threw me off, was the 'bloodplay'. it actually stopped my reading. but i was able to move past and get caught up again.