by zagrebzagreb
An intense, truly excellent piece of writing. Beautifully bittersweet.
One doesn't often find writing of this calibre on Literotica. The story is mesmerising, and the grace and beauty you have brought to the expression of it, unparalleled. Sure, there are a few spelling glitches, but for the first time ever, the writing was so brilliant that I could ignore the gravel and simply immerse myself in the wonder unfolding here. Utterly exquisite – and incredibly well-written. Bravo. And thank you. The reader who commented before me, alerted me to this story. S/He was right. You are a writer extraordinaire. Please keep writing. You have It, in spades.
A complex, interwoven piece of writing; a missed opportunity, regret. The interior dialogue is very good. Fine piece of work.
A sad ballad of a story. I want to cry and scream and rail in response. I really wanted this to work out for the two. It's a dream though because he's such a piece of shit corrupting vulnerable woman for a guy who deserves the worse death possible. Fucking asshole I want to kill him one strip of skin at a time. Amazing writing as you got me going.