All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 01'

Well done. Thoroughly enjoyed the entire story!

Really enjoyed the tale. It is quite humorous besides being an iteresting, sexy love affair.

An unusual love affair. Seems to me that they went at it backwards. But it obviously worked out well.

I just found this story and I would have to say it was neat. Then I went through the rest of your submission. Some I like, some I don't. But one thing for sure you have a quirky sense of humour. Humour is always good in a story.

My only complain is that you should watch your verbs and adjective like 'lose' and 'loose. A couple of spelling mistakes here and there. Otherwise you have some neat stories going.

Cheers.

If there is anything literotica needs, its the lighter touch shown here. A few more writers like Ada would be good.

THIS IS ONLY THE SECOND SERIES I HAVE READ OF ADA'S SO I HOPE IT TURNS OUT AS GOOD. SO FAR I'M NOT DISAPPOINTED.

I just finished reading under cover chapter 01 and must say that I I like the direction the story is headed. The stage is being setup masterfully and I look forward to reading the next chapter.