All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 12'

They just get better as we go. Great work. Can't wait for what happens next.

The main character Erin plays hard to get as Cade chases her with the whole office watching. Both are determined; Erin to resist him, and Cade to seduce the object of his sexual desire. The erotic action heats up allowing the story to build up to a slow burn! And the next chapter is coming out when?

Enjoyable Read!

love the way the tables r being turned on Erin. cant wait to read more on the hot couple.

Oh.My.Gohh..

I do really enjoy your stories very much...

And the seducing going the other way now works out rather well I'd say ^_^

This isn't seduction it is assault. Doesn't this woman have any self respect, or is it "act like a slut and be treated like a slut?" So far she has acted like the stupid office cunt, just short of screwing in the supply room. I was looking foward to the female perspective in a story but so far this has been disappointing. If you are just trying to write another stroke story this is ok then, but if you are really trying to write you have missed the target.

BRAVO! YOUR DOIN' JUST FINE ADA STUART. AND YOUR ENGLISH IS FINE ALSO. DON'T WORRY ABOUT THE SYNTEXT MISTAKES. CONCENTRATE ON YOUR STORY. IT'S VERY ENJOYABLE.

I am really enjoying the seduction games being played. Erin encourages Cade to take a more willing lover from his harem of office women in the chase to capture his affection. Erin should understand that her being the forbidden fruit also makes her the most desirable. Great writing!