All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 14'
by Ada Stuart
- 13 Comments
CharlesJover 17 years agoLove every bit of it :)
Thanks Ada for interesting, quirky, funny, sacarstic conversations between your hero and heroine :)
Anonymousover 17 years agoLove this story, especially the last few chapters,so romantic! its very well written, looking forward to more of masterpiece (:
Anonymousover 15 years agoI wish you would make a sequal for this. It's bar d to belive this story isn't on the top list. Can I ask I think you may be aware of a author in winglin named CrazyFF coppied your stories but replaced the character with Asian idols such as Wu Zun and Ella Chen.
Ada Stuartover 15 years agoAuthorNo, I wasn't aware of someone copying my stories and posting them as their own - so thanks for telling me! But, I'm very aware of how easy it is so I can't say I'm surprised that it can be done. Only mildly surprised it happened to me..... Maybe I'll just take it as a compliment -:)
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoCade is a rapist, Warren is a pimp, and Erin is a stupid cunt. There is no was you can savage this story. Go try to write porn of 16 year olds.
Anonymousover 14 years agoYou obvioulsy don't know a good story if it slapped you in the face.
tangledweedabout 5 years agoI am enjoying this romantic tale, but it does go into that territory where a woman will melt into a puddle if the guy won't take no for an answer. It may work in a fantasy, but for most guys that aren't perfect it will likely lead to an arrest. Lucky for him, she has no resistance to his persistence.
SAV12almost 5 years agoIT'S JUST A ROMANTIC COMEDY PC POLICE. WE ALL KNOW THAT NO MEANS NO. BOTH ERIN AND CADE ARE TO BLAME IN A COURT OF LAW, WHICH WE'RE NOT. HENCE IT'S A REALLY GOOD STORY. I HOPE ADA CONTINUES. SHE MAKES ME LAUGH AND GETS ARISE OUT OF ME TOO. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ADA. I LOVE IT SO FAR.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis should have gone under noncon/dubcon. I find the labeling of this as love highly troubling.
fantasy57almost 3 years agoI think that this story could fit multiple categories very well. The best thing I love about this story, or any story here or elsewhere, is if I don't like it I don't have to read it.The choice is always mine. Now I chose to move on to the next chapter.
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