All Comments on 'Understanding Emmalyn'

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Helena

This is one beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it but tell me why have you stoped writing. It has been over a year since your last story, please write again soon as you are a very good writer.

Wow, this is a really great story of a mother accepting her daughters' love! Well done and well written!

~Anonymous

At first I thought that this story would not be to my liking, I thought oh well. I read and now I am glad that I did, this story is beautiful! Only one thing I can ask, would you be as kind to wright the story in the girls point of view aswell. Love Katie

I read your disclaimer in the beginning and was tempted not to read on. Boy I'm glad that I did. Your a very good writer and I will look for more stories from you. Like one of your other says, I would like to hear the story from the girls perspective. It would also be nice to find out what happened to mom, did she find someone to share her life with. Anyway thank you and please write more.

Beautifully written!

Great, beautyful story, really nice change of perspective.

Loved everything about it! I was only sad it had to end.

I really liked it. I would have preferred another scene afterwards of them talking about their feelings though. Feels liked one more scene is missing.

And I'm not particularly into Sapphic Love stories. But this was really more in the spirit of a Romance and it was a love deeper than a "relationship". I'm proud for you writing a mother that could accept them. Most parents are not tolerant of their teen's choices, no matter what their own particular picadilloes had been when they were young. My own father. The conservative, deacon, masonic lodge member, quiet, unassuming, corporate accountant - had been called the "Hell-Driver" when a teenage driver. Who knew? And he was especially hard on me when I learned to drive? So, one never can guess. And parents are funny. This was very good.

I was really hoping there would be more light shed on Emmalyn... the intrigue is too much, this deserved a sequel at least, multiple chapters would have been ideal. Hope you get back to writing some time...

Cool that you made it with a twist and kept it clean and did not make it tawdry by getting the mom involved. Nice touch.

One of the best stories iv read.

Plzplz continue

So beautiful. If only the mother had been brave enough to live upto her love and not be ashamed for who she was. The girls might have had another mother in their lives.