All Comments on 'Underthings'

Totally stupid

....original and unique! C_S, I love your writing style. I hope you will post more stories of Sophie, Maria and Justin. Continue developing their characters and their background.

I enjoyed how you played out the erotica. Too many writers keep repeating the same old, same old, with monotonous repetition.

I did not notice any anachronisms which is a big deal for me. Too many writers posting to this site lack experience in Non-Suburbia or basic knowledge of historical times.

Thank god it was short. Utter drivel.

apparently not too uncommon. TK U MLJ LV NV

To short...We don't know if he is married to one of them, no both or not even married...If this was just a fantasy from a guy living alone in a farm...I could accept it...As it wasn't announced as a fantasy...1*

Intriguing! Short but promising in its potential. We must read more about this little farm and its inhabitants. Two wives! Now that might solve the problem of the divorce rate. Two women for him to pleasure, two women to pleasure him; no wonder it's illegal!

Just a really silly story.