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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent

Great storytelling. I really was pulled effortlessly into your story. Top marks

The ending was a real swerve. It works when I think that this was her oxygen deprived hallucinations as she died.

Compelling characters.

Haldor

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