All Comments on 'Underwing'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
HOT!

Very well written. Minor errors ("alright" instead of "all right) didn't limit the hotness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please!

Tom and Lucy seem to enjoy their time together. Lucy loves Tom's hairy body -- his chest and abs, cock and thighs. She can't get enough of his cock and creamy cum, and he loves her just as well. Glad to read more about their sexcpades!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

The sex was unprotected...is she on birth control?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot

The stories

That wet dreams are made of

Hopefully

You will write more adventures about this couple.

Happy New Year. 2017...

jimmcdonald609jimmcdonald609over 7 years ago
Erotic twist

Highly erotic twist on a very familiar theme.

Well done.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 7 years ago
Chapter 2 please

He likes Lucy.

Wife Gwen likes women.

Tom, Lucy, Gwen 3sum !!

Or write a chapter from Gwen's POV.

HardBenHardBenover 6 years ago
PURE EROTIC BLISS

You are an incredible writer!

I suppose for an "Old Fella" like me it is every man's fantasy, but I can't see how anyone would not be totally transfixed by this story.

Fabulous descriptive wiriting!

Absolutely fantastic.

Thank you SO much.

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