by cantdog
I love the way you've captured the almost formal social courtesy of your characters in the dialogue and contrasted that with the increasing intensity of the sex. If it was deliberate it was damn clever;if it wasn't deliberate, it was pretty smart anyway
Loved the mature couple and yet you kept the older woman/younger man thing going. Great line "over-appolstered". Also the oral only sex fit perfectly in your going to work time frame. Good job, cantdog!
esl
... for making it clear that sex is every bit as steamy as we rack up the decades. Hot stuff, cant. ~Imp