All Comments on 'Undoing'

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HotSprings22HotSprings22about 12 years ago
Fantastic

I love stories of friends suddenly giving in. This was excellent.

CounselorJohnCounselorJohnabout 12 years ago
Excellent

Beautiful passionate story. Well written and edited. Give us more. I would love to read this as the culmination of the build up to this event, but it was good anyway just by itself. Thanks.

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