All Comments on 'Unexpected Ch. 01'

I love it.......pls next chapter soon

Great start. Really enjoying the way you provide background and details of the life of the characters. More please.

Such a good start can't wait for more

I loved it and I want more. Please don't make us wait for long!.....Pleeeeeaaassseee!

Omg love it! Great start

-- less background etc.

Perhaps they will be swimming in their Speedos? Any chance of that

Can't wait to read more. Keep up the awesome work and please don't keep us waiting forever ;-)

I think maybe you might need a bit of a refresher in grammar, but other than that, I was hooked :) it's a great first chapter :) anyone who would make a comment like that is better off reading stories like "21 Dick Salute" or "Gangbanged At Bed Bath & Beyond" or "How I Fitted 5 Cocks In My Mouth".

So when are we gonna get the next chapter?

Can't wait to see how you proceed

I love it and can't wait to see how this progresses

I can't wait to see where you go with this, beautiful characters btw. More background, anon asking for less and more sex can go beat his meat off on other stories. Cheers!

Love it..Will definitely be following the story...👍👍

I have not been this excited about starting a new story in a long time, this old gal is happy bunny.

Absolutely fantastic start..love the characters, plot and their senaw of humor!

i am loving this strory x

Love it

Dude,the story is nice but please get an editor... The lack of proper punctuation marks in most of the dialogues is a huge setback on the overall flow and there were times that it got annoying.I hope the subsequent chapters don't have the same problem.

Loving it!!

Just to let you know, while there are seventeen chapters, the story is far from complete.