All Comments on 'Unexpected Ch. 03'

Cant wait to read more of this

Why did you have to end it when it got to the good stuff...lol. Excellent story so far. Hurry up with the next chapter. I fear that girl will test Callen and Trace's bond. I don't like her.

This is a great story so far :) can't wait for the next chapters!!

This chapter made me love him even more and I'm glad Alex kept to his promise of finishing up their conversation from that morning's confusion. I hope Sasha gets caught either being mean to Tracy or does something to make Callen realize she's not with his time!

THIS IS A VERY PLEASING STORY WONDERFUL , I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF THIS STORY TONIGHT WELL DONE YOU X X X BEST WISHES JONATHAN UK

This is turning out to be one of the better stories in this section. I can not understand why I have not run across your story before. I guess I haven't looked hard enough.

Keep up the good work and perhaps you might consider publishing another story.