All Comments on 'Unexpected Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Thank you for Ch 15 - and on a holiday weekend (Easter) no less

It was nice that Callen filled in some background on Alex during Tracy's time away - I'm also happy they both have each ended up with a child to care for as a result of their relationships - sort of instant families - and Callen could redirect his parental feelings away from Tracy after his decision to remain in Fort Myers

Looking forward to more down the road

arthurruearthurrueabout 7 years ago
good work

stories are always good with all the good moments going on among the main characters which is what happening in yours. i hope you will bring out the next chapter sooner [cant wait]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Very touching and emotional chapter. I still want to read some more details of the loving/sex times between Alex and Tracey like you did for the firsts chapters. It was moving along good on chapter 14 and bam, Benny interrupts.

MezmeraldMezmeraldabout 7 years ago
Please, more!

I have enjoyed this series emensley. I hope you will lengthen kg, including the reaction for the horse on Corys end and Benny's. The weddings etc. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Ditto

Ditto Anonymous of 4/16... I want more of the sex couplings of Alex and Tracey. Glad they will be married!

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