All Comments on 'Unexpected Developments'

by mersennius_prime

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very clever change of direction

Thank you for a neat read . As an fan of the vampire genre , I am a little curious if there are plans to write about Anna teaching the fledgling about his new life ?

You know , how to feed ? What abilities and weaknesses he might have ?

Just a thought . Enjoyed the story very much.

ContrahentContrahentover 5 years ago

I usually avoid vampire stories as a matter of course. It isn't that I dislike vampire tropes, just that I don't want to read poorly written twilight inspired fiction.

You have a way of putting an interesting twist on things. I began to suspect James was the virgin sacrifice partway through the first scene. I didn't expect her to be a vampire though, so you caught me by surprise there.

Overall, five stars.

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