All Comments on 'Unexpected Events Ch. 17'

You are happy, then sad at the same time, happy again and sad again, just pathetic really. So, you feel that way with Kyle and that should signal it is not working... and then you find out he's cheating with your cousin and the boss' wife, that doesn't make you more sad no, you have sex with Kyle again immediately. wtf? Your story was so much better with the early chapters, now it is just rinse and repeat. Move on from the Kyle crap, it's boring

How much bad shit can happen to one person? Already Has 1 Kid And Another On The way....I feel sorry for them. The first few chapters were believable but now not so much. The sex is entertaining :)

This is pretty hot.

But...I really hope she doesn't stay with Kyle in the end, while the sex scenes are just so hot and always make me hard, I hope she ends with someone perfect for her..

Please develop kyle into a better character. And please have more pregnant sex!!

Is there someone that hasn't ''forced her'' into sex yet? Maybe the building doorman? Cable guy? Phone guy? Bus driver?

I then felt the person take its head and start to kiss on my neck. This author uses far too many filler word, Umm, Yes, Ugg, Ugh, etc. Surely you need to watch the overuse of any words. Your grasp of the English language, is mediocre at the best.

The person they took his hand and started to rub my clit again

I, for one am not sad this 'story' is fini. It became increasingly difficult to read, due to all the inane wording. I will look at some of the other stories, but I suspect English AND editing is beyond this author's purview.