All Comments on 'Unexpected Group Journey Ch. 01'

horny_desires you clearly display affection and attachment to your story and by putting it into words you've taken complete ownership of a personal memory which must be satisfying. The problem I have is not with your story but with your writing. If English isn't your first language then this can be forgiven and I'll be eager to see your next post, however, if it is, you need to undertake a writing or literature course. Your basic understanding of grammar and plot structure will be the reason your stories never reach a wider audience.

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