All Comments on 'Unexpected Guest Ch. 01'

please keep going soon!

Keep going... I just love your stories

You are one of my favorite authors, and I was so glad to see you are posting a new story. Great beginning! I can't wait for the next chapter.

you are one of my favourite authors im so happy to see this new story and from the excellent kick off im eager to see the next installment...!

your story is like music to my ears. Glad to see you writing again.

I gave up on this rediculous excuse for a story after the first 3 or 4 paragraphs. The author should be embarassed at writing this garbage.

the Ct. Yankee

your one one my fav authurss i'm so glad your writnig again and i'm loveing the start of the new story keep going i'm sure gonna be looking for more

The negative comment was a pitiful excuse for feedback. I am so happy you are writing again! I love the tension and witty dialogue between the characters, and I can't wait to see what happens next! So glad you're back Ada!

p.s.

If you are going to leave feedback, be intelligent about it. It's okay to not like a story, but give some helpful critiquing- not harsh words that are as completely useless as, I'm sure, the author of the comment. Thanks!

that was amazing

keep those updates coming

you are my fav author on lit

that totally blew my mind

wonderful start

keep those updates coming

And I'm off to read the next chapter...

Glad to see some new stuff from you. I didn't catch this first chapter when it posted and I'm off to catch myself up on the story.

Your stories really getting better and better. Very polished. Written like a pro. I would say you could give a few published romance authors a run for their money like Virginia Henley, Cassie Edwards(read one of her book. It was so so dull). Anyway good job Ada!

The tension & humour is terrific.

Looking forward to more!

It’s a promising start to the story even though it’s a similar situation to “Temptation”, I didn’t check the dates to see which one came first.

I would have given 5 stars ⭐️ but one sentence REALLY threw me off...

“he gave her a sultry smile as if he offered himself to women all the time and always knew that 'No' actually meant 'Yes'.”

Seriously? That is incredible douche baggery in the extreme and such a bad example to set anyone, even if you’re only joking because No ALWAYS means NO. There’s only one exception to that rule which is during a consensual scene in BDSM, where the correct word for stop (or slow down) are those discussed beforehand. The easiest to remember is the common traffic light system Red = Stop Now, Yellow = slow down/I’m close to my limit/there’s a problem, Green = carry on

Sets the scene nicely. Surprised he wasn't injured in the attack or did she have so little strength; perhaps that could be re-worked sometime in the future but don't ask me to ghost it as I haven't got your skills in writing. A typical but very encouraging Ada start.

Now to see what ups and downs will happen for a week in a one roomed cottage.