All Comments on 'Unexpected Handyman'

by annafaye

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H.H.Morant over 15 years ago

For once a plausible story line well executed

Maybe one story a month on this list rates "100" IMHO - and this is one of them.

I particularly liked the slow build-up and then the hot sex - but not the standard multi-orgasmic variety that most people seem to think is required (fellatio, cunnilingus, intercourse several times in rapid sequence)

I am looking forward to reading more of the author's stories - I hope she has some up

Vitorio over 15 years ago

A tender interlude

Annafaye, you write beautifully. A nicely developed relationship. This is the most realistic of your stories so far. Gentle and tender. I look forward to more of the same.

london_james2010 about 14 years ago

Fantastic

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck and I would really love to hear from you.

James

PS The title also refers to the great photo