by CoCoNiy101
The perfect ending to a perfect story thanks so much for sharing!!
In no means am i trying to be sarcastic but i like how they went to this from meeting at a grocery store.You should continue the story
You should write more omg :( i love this story just enough sex too okgrvhjgvbj i want more omg ima cry now since it ended i dont come across good stories like this too often jgbjbgjb kj ;[
I agee ith the grocery store comment. We pretty much followed them all throughout their whole relationship. Great story.
This was another great story. I hope u continue giving us ur wonderful writings.
I loved how you allowed your story and the characters in your story to evolve and grow without making the story feel rushed or hurried in anyway. Coco you are great at this writing thing keep it up. Your words are refreshing! KittyOh48
I need a Bobby in my life. Lol. Loved the story! Great job keep up the good work.
I loved the whole series. The characters and situations were well organized and presented. My only problem with any of this was in the spelling errors. Trying to figure out what the real word was was a distraction that took away from the quality of the work. Please keep writing but proofread a bit more thoroughly.
superb storyline and fantastic characters. this story is very well written. you can tell it was written by an author not just an everyday wrter. so i thankyou for the story which i very much enjoyed. please keep writting for us. thank you again, bob
Here we are...with all our faults...the things that makes us who we are! Love the way you put all this together believably!
Did Bobby and Natasha even LIKE each other?! They annoyed each other so much. I felt zero chemistry. Even some of the sex scenes were odd.
You also need a good dictionary or a better editor. The misuse of some words was distracting.