All Comments on 'Unexpected Interest Ch. 06'

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sportychica334sportychica334almost 12 years ago
Loved It!!!!!!

Five stars ***** excellent update.

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2almost 12 years ago
Great

The perfect ending to a perfect story thanks so much for sharing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Well Done.

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 12 years ago
Beautiful Ending!

Loved it!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

In no means am i trying to be sarcastic but i like how they went to this from meeting at a grocery store.You should continue the story

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezover 11 years ago
>.< I LOVED IT ALL OF IT

You should write more omg :( i love this story just enough sex too okgrvhjgvbj i want more omg ima cry now since it ended i dont come across good stories like this too often jgbjbgjb kj ;[

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I agee ith the grocery store comment. We pretty much followed them all throughout their whole relationship. Great story.

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 11 years ago

This was another great story. I hope u continue giving us ur wonderful writings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I enjoyed this story. I loved this story!

I loved how you allowed your story and the characters in your story to evolve and grow without making the story feel rushed or hurried in anyway. Coco you are great at this writing thing keep it up. Your words are refreshing! KittyOh48

colorfullove410colorfullove410over 11 years ago

Great story! It ended perfectly!!!! Keep up the good work!!! :-)

london101london101about 11 years ago
awesome

I need a Bobby in my life. Lol. Loved the story! Great job keep up the good work.

IronDragonIronDragonabout 11 years ago
Great Series!

Excellent! A LOT of fun! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great Story

I loved the whole series. The characters and situations were well organized and presented. My only problem with any of this was in the spelling errors. Trying to figure out what the real word was was a distraction that took away from the quality of the work. Please keep writing but proofread a bit more thoroughly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
super story

superb storyline and fantastic characters. this story is very well written. you can tell it was written by an author not just an everyday wrter. so i thankyou for the story which i very much enjoyed. please keep writting for us. thank you again, bob

arrowglassarrowglassover 8 years ago
Great story series!

Here we are...with all our faults...the things that makes us who we are! Love the way you put all this together believably!

Ginger630Ginger630almost 3 years ago

Did Bobby and Natasha even LIKE each other?! They annoyed each other so much. I felt zero chemistry. Even some of the sex scenes were odd.

You also need a good dictionary or a better editor. The misuse of some words was distracting.

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