All Comments on 'Unexpected Visitor'

Vastly different scene. Well written, and a joy to read.

A well written story, nicely done. 5*****

I first read this story on the DtV site where you posted it the other day. I loved it and alsoread some of your roommate story. I love your writing and I hope you post more of it here and at Diana the Valkyrie.

Regards, Rodman

Great story. Please note that your are putting in excursion where I think you mean exertion.

That's really good writing. Most stories about a muscle girl and an average guy are about domination and humiliation, but not yours. Maddie actually liked David and was nice to him the whole time, and that's much more pleasing and erotic than a heartless arrogant bitch. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

I would love to see a growing together series with both bodies working together to peak for a competition

This is right up my alley for sure, but honestly when it gets pushed too far out of realism I lose interest. One hundred pull ups, and says she can go on for an HOUR doing them? That's when I stopped.

Good, interesting to find a continuation. Will read your other stories.

One of my favorites. Continuation please.