All Comments on 'Unforgettable Fire Pt. 03: The Present'

You have truly out did yourself, especially since English is not your first language.

I'm so glad they got all of that off their chest and were able to move forward. Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Everything about that was just amazing! Just...WOW!!

beautiful.

That was awesomely amazing!!! The emotions were raw and stripped down to the soul. Loved it, loved it, loved it!!

this chapter was incredible! it was so emotionally provoking, real, honest, vulnerable, and sexy. job well done!

First question please re u a Ghanaian..........i find myself in de same situation... ..my boyfriend of three years just left to de UK for medical school......He will spend six years to complete school.......i keep asking myself if I should wait for him.....ur story is giving me hope.......i don't want to be like Hero one day......thank you .......Naa Ayele

The best story I have read on the site. Absolutely brilliant, I enjoyed it so much!!!!!

Amazing. If you are writing a novel, please post. I really need a good romance author.

This is the best story in the entire universe of this genre. Please please can you write a chapter where Finn and Hero have a baby. It would make thousands and thousands and maybe millions of people happy, nay, ecstatic. I adore your writing and always reread this story. You have made so many people happy. Thank you.