All Comments on 'Uni Life Ch. 01'

Nice setting up characters and the scene before getting down to the sex.

It is good to know there is a kindred soul out there, one who gets as much out of chasing after rugby team boys as I do - just try not to get banned from socials like I was!

I like the style and sentence flow, didn't pick up on any mistakes. I hope you continue the story and that I get as lucky as your protagonist!

Incorrect use of the word "enormity" - look that one up, an awful lot of people get it wrong.

Hi anon, I assume you're referring to how I used enormity in reference to his nose. I realise it means morally wrong which was intended as a subtle humour, that the nose was actually physically sinful on his face. Thanks for all your feedback! It helps me to add to my new stories! Oh and other anon, I'm more akin to Tim. I don't play rugby unfortunately.

enjoying it, love to read more