All Comments on 'Unintentional Seduction of a Friend'

Great start and lots of possibilities for broadening og the story line

Great start. Keep the story going! Thanks!

Good so far, keep it going.....

Really good! Keep going please!!!

... and you need not go any further .... imaginations can run rampant or nomads can wander about the fawn who tasted the nearby rambling brook. this is such a real teaching snapshot of pastels with a streak or two of mauve and deep purple. enjoy and thanks

Very nice. I loved the detail and build up. Would love to read of your writings.

YES THAT'S CORRECT.. EYE WAS REALLY ENJOYING THIS HEAR STORY , AND JUST WHEN IT REALLY BECAME INTRIGUING , THE ENTIRE STORY ENDED..SEW WOOD EWE PLEASE RIGHT SOME MOORE OF IT..ORE ARE EWE JUST TEASING US ?EWE DEW NO THAT IT HAS POTENTIAL OF BECOMING VERY INTERESTING & SOME WHAT NASTY. ( -: JUST BEE THANKFUL THAT EYE DEW KNOT ,TRY TWO RIGHT A STORY .. KNOW-BODY WOOD BEE ABLE TOO READ IT...LOL

made me VERY hony - thank you

I love this! Short, sweet, and sexy -- JB

Wonderfully imagined and perfectly written.