All Comments on 'Uninvited but Welcome'

The story line kept veering right, left and sideways - any one of the lines would make an interesting story, but this was too unfocused to do much at all.

you lost me between the ooohhhsss & the aahhhhs with nothing really in between but gsdgh gnjfgpofdj skdswutouedh sjdsfjgjdo <<<<<< that is about what it was.!!**

Try one subject at a time please in the future.!** Thx.