All Comments on 'Uninvited Guests'

somehow i felt disconnected from this story. possibly the third preson?

you might read up on coversation in the how to here.

Awfull. This is the least erotic story I have read on this site. It reads as if it were written by a 12 year old who has seen some movie on cinemax and read a sex ed book. The sex is very mechanical and not at all arousing.

I loved this story. Please continue. Please, Please, Please!!!!

the others about your writing. I've been around the world 5 times,and lived in many of the areas. You write like an Indonesian talks. In regular verbal conversation it is not a bad thing, but in written form, it's a bit hard to follow at times. Otherwise I enjoyed your story.

I loved your story but especially the last part about dressing up Mary and Shelly. Fantastic!

I think you must write these works just for me.I love them.They are so hot.

get past the first half of page one when she said she was going to have fun with this toy(him). Another 'boy toy' story......

Well, I really enjoyed the story, it's any guy's dreams come true to have 2 gorgeous young females move in and have a hot and loving relationship. 5 stars