All Comments on 'United Move'

by MaitreNuit

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klara18klara18over 11 years ago
Great Translation

it is a super Story!. I likedit much. very well done.

klara ;-)

Ava39Ava39over 11 years ago
Lovely Story

with Humor and Sex.

Well done. I want to read more from you in englisch.

The Trucker was funny.

kisses

Ava

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great work, i like it

You are a great author.

Sex ist fantastic. More of this

darksouldomdarksouldomover 11 years ago
A super Move

Much better than the german version. Great Job

dark

GelehrteGelehrteover 11 years ago
A compentent Story

Short, sexy, with humor and young people.

5

Gelehrte

MaitreNuitMaitreNuitover 11 years agoAuthor
I thank you all

It's great to have such a positive reception towards a new story.

I still remember how nervous I was, when I first started to even think about translating my stories into English. Now after I've done it, I feel just fucking awesome!!!

Soon all of my stories will be published both in German and English (I guess about Wednesday, 12th of September *ggg*)

Thanks to all of you!

MaitreNuit

lindwurm111lindwurm111over 11 years ago
I enjoyed it very much

Thank you for that story.

I like the trucker ;-). Great written.

lg

lw

FreddyKruegerFreddyKruegerover 11 years ago
Nice Work Maitre

I like it. 5 Stars

Freddy

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE OLD SAYING CUMS FORTH

if its rocking dont come knocking. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What can i say

You made a great job. The Story ist very good. I love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Moving

That is want I want ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A real pleasure to read

Although you're no native speaker, the story turned out to be very good. You kept the tone light and with a lot of humor, set the sex scenes in the right mood. I can imagine how horny your male character would have been, given the circumstances, and I'm quite sure, the love balls didn't help Monica at all.

But my alltime favorite is your description of how the accident happened. I had my share of those trucks from eastern europe in my life and I exactly know what you mean.

Keep writing that way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
horny too

You are a great author!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just hot

No unnecessary ado, plain hot sex and great characters you can actually believe. I loved the blushing cop playing peeping tom.

Anonymous
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