All Comments on 'University Drama Ch. 01'

Author's Note: 'Halls' refers to Halls of residents the British equivalent of Dormitories.

Any notes belong at the start or end, never middle of a page. Also you've written a character, Emily, who doesn't have all that great of a personality. I took an instant dislike to her with her attitude.

Anonymous is a pedantic ass. It's not important where the note goes, and your tastes in women and their attitude is not universal.

Good! Should be continued!