All Comments on 'University Freshers'

Great story will enjoy reading about the further adventures!

Short, to the point, sweet, and hot! I liked it.

...just not lately.

the story started out as preparation for a social event, but ended up two nice females discussing about their bodies and what to wear to the event

then they were ready to go and the story ended.

disappointing

Great story. Hope to read about more of their experiments, only it would be better if no guys were involved. lol!

Started off great, but it abruptly went from believable to total fantasy. Wish there'd been more build up.

Hope it continues!

I am just as hot and wet as they are...off to the shower. Thanks! Keep writing.

OK, so it wandered off theme a little, as if the author decided she wanted to get it published before she got to where she'd intended to go, but there were lots of things to like about a story that clearly explained what was in the author's head.

Not a bad effort, but could have done with a vigorous edit.