All Comments on 'Unknown Benefits of Life Modeling'

Nice turn a round of events in your story......... arousing and erotic too !! Now that Sandy and Tom have an arrangement; maybe another chapter can continue Tom's learning new skills and showing how he helps Sandy too......... thank you !!

Perhaps you meant "Live Modeling"?

You managed to demonstrate you know even less about the subject than your protagonist.

If you did this using voice recognition software, upgrade to a better version, and get a PC with more speed and capacity. Most spell check programs won't be able to distinguish between the correct word and a similar sounding word.

At least spelling, grammar, person, tense, etc., seemed pretty good. Plot, for a flash story, was also rather novel.