All Comments on 'Unknown Desires Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Rubbish

This is just a rambling page of utter rubbish.

loveloverloveloveralmost 7 years ago
Well written

I got lost at moments but I loved the descriptions and their intimacy and caring and lust. What about Olivia who wanted Michelle more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice start!

A little difficult to keep the characters straight at the beginning, but if got MUCH better. Hope you continue!

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