All Comments on 'Unknown Pleasures'

...while I held my dick. Great, natural dialogue. Keep it up.

The amount of extraneous information indicated that this was going to be a novel. You could easily cut it down to two pages, two-and-a-half, tops, and it would be a much better read..

I love this story - erotic and romantic. I love the characters and what they get up to. More please.

Fun, sexy, well-written story & appreciated the music references :)

Great story! I would very much like to continue with the participation of three couples, where two more experienced ones will seduce a third less experienced one. It would also be a very exciting story for me and my wife!