All Comments on 'Unknown Presence - The Vessel'

Nice flow and rythmn, and what a picture you paint.

What with that whole man was made in gods image crap, so why not women were made in satan's, haha. Actually, my first thought was since the incubus told Leeann that any who touch her will commit adultery and incest I guessed that when the babie's grew up since their were a female and a male that they would mate and create the true devil child, but I have an odd mind. Though that would be an interesting story. Anyway, I enjoyed the tale and look foward to more from you, thanks for sharing.

Love your tale, SV...scary and sexy, all in one! what's more, i love your writing style with your mix of humor and lust! i hope there will be a sequel, it's sounds like there could and definitely should be! well done, Vicki!!

5 Stars!!

I FUCKIN LOVE IT

SEQUEL PLZ