All Comments on 'Unlawful Love'

by JimRitchins

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CndmovnCndmovnover 18 years ago
A bit rushed

The story seemed to be rushing to when they meet and then it is over. Why the hurry?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
any more

this story doesnt really go anywhere, so will there be another chapter???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Hope there is a second part..

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