All Comments on 'Unlocking Tally Ch. 01'

by NerdyNymph

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

My only complaint is that perhaps things are happening too quickly. It took me a couple of weeks to go from front to rear with my first vibe! However the story easily passsed the 'getting the reader wet' test, so I'm looking forward to Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Turned on

HOLY SHIT that was so hot

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