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All Comments on 'Unlocking the Door'
by thezinger
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aliparksalmost 13 years agosweet...
It was good, but a thick sadness weaved through it. I wanted more detail in the sex but you wrote it well. I feel for Traci. keep writing...
Kojotealmost 13 years agoYeah...
Really pretty good. Very nice buildup and a really good revelation. I just missed a little more details about what Traci was feeling in the last third. That would have made it great!
northlanderalmost 13 years agoWell Donee
A good story about the initial exploration between two people.
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