All Comments on 'Unqualifiedly Datable Ch. 01'

by Arisan_Maru

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fn2b1fn2b1almost 14 years ago
Good start....

I liked it! Keep the chapters coming....

MissCaitMissCaitalmost 14 years ago
I like Jay.

Good job on making this guy believable and admirable at the same time. I'll be watching for the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
MORE!!!

oo cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!

Please keep them coming! :)

jac xxO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
OMG!

What a cliff hanger! Moooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee!

GREAT story so far!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So Cool!

Cool start...don't leave us hanging too long, please. Interesting storylines are few and far btwn.

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 14 years ago
good!

PLEASE don't leave us hanging! I hope you post more to this soon, the story line promises to be very interesting!

larea412larea412almost 14 years ago
GREAT!!!

I love it. I can't wait for more. This is a great start. Keep them coming fast.

iamsuziamsuzalmost 14 years ago
Love it!

Hope there will be more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
You just had to do it!!

I hope you write fast. It's not nice to leave us hanging like that! Hope the next chapter is quick and also longer. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Oh MY God!

So good! More please! Really, really good!

NyghtQueenNyghtQueenalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful

The story is great! I am looking forward to reading more of it. Please write them fast! *grins*

WickedWendyDruWickedWendyDrualmost 14 years ago
Unqualifiedly Realistic

Very nicely characterized. You've breathed life and depth into your characters and I'm definitely interested in seeing where they go from here and what happens. The whole "I'm begging to bust out of my closet" thing is a little shopworn, but that's because it's so terribly, unfortunately true. You'd think in the 21st century we'd be beyond it, but alas... So, kudos. I really enjoyed reading it and will keep an eye out for more. Good luck with the story, or series as it may become. I, for one, would like to see some real adventure take hold in the life of our blood-bounces-on-ice-boy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

hope that you continue this story line because it has alot of character. i want to know how it ends

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More please

Omg great start I really can't wait for more

geseendgeseendalmost 14 years ago

can't leave this hanging here. there has to be more to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great start

I love college stories.

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