by Arisan_Maru
Good job on making this guy believable and admirable at the same time. I'll be watching for the next chapters.
oo cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!
Please keep them coming! :)
jac xxO
What a cliff hanger! Moooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee!
GREAT story so far!
Cool start...don't leave us hanging too long, please. Interesting storylines are few and far btwn.
PLEASE don't leave us hanging! I hope you post more to this soon, the story line promises to be very interesting!
I love it. I can't wait for more. This is a great start. Keep them coming fast.
I hope you write fast. It's not nice to leave us hanging like that! Hope the next chapter is quick and also longer. Nice job.
The story is great! I am looking forward to reading more of it. Please write them fast! *grins*
Very nicely characterized. You've breathed life and depth into your characters and I'm definitely interested in seeing where they go from here and what happens. The whole "I'm begging to bust out of my closet" thing is a little shopworn, but that's because it's so terribly, unfortunately true. You'd think in the 21st century we'd be beyond it, but alas... So, kudos. I really enjoyed reading it and will keep an eye out for more. Good luck with the story, or series as it may become. I, for one, would like to see some real adventure take hold in the life of our blood-bounces-on-ice-boy.
hope that you continue this story line because it has alot of character. i want to know how it ends