by nokoi
There were way too many cliches and using phrases and words such as, "my dearest" and "Babes" and ...::shudder:: "mons." Give me a break. Is that the best you can do?
Peechka
Sounds like my internet love meeting and me having to go home... How did you know???
Very touching sexy story and to reply to the guy who complained about too many 'babes' in there, well dear there are actually real people who use these terms in their lives... hmmm... me... just to name a 'few' ;)