All Comments on 'Until Drake'

by LushTales

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olsaltyolsaltyabout 6 years ago
Great Stroker Plus

The idea of upending her engagement to a less than primal man in favor of a real cocksman added some dimension to this could-have-been-ordinary stroke story. Good pacing, good progression, hot conclusion....nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Meh

As the writer couldn't decide on the girl's name I really lost immersion, couldnt finish :(

LushTalesLushTalesabout 6 years agoAuthor
Sorry about error

I’ve resubmitted after fixing the name issue. Sorry and thanks to the reader who let me know. My bad!

acupacupabout 6 years ago
Good story

Excellent story telling, but felt like it was chopped off and not ended properly.

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