All Comments on 'Unwanted Obsession Ch. 04'

Finally. It was worth the wait, though too short. You delved into their psyches much more than before. This is taking a very interesting turn. Would Ronald allow his addiction to Lowish to ruin his life?

pleaaasseee write more of it. if this is the end, you've finished it too fast. and this chapter went by way to fast. please elaborate more on their weekend.

It's a love story between rapist and victim? Somehow I don't see this one ending well... Very twisted... Amazing writing however.

You have a sense of humor. : ) I like that.

I like Ronald getting his comeuppance, falling for a victim. The three sisters of fate are sitting around laughing their asses off. This is a great read.

Diggin your story so far. Wonder how it'll turn out. Its easy to guess I suppose. Your finishing comments this time made me laugh. Your quite a character

So dark its deeper than black yet ...through it all you manage not to truly hate him.

Still reading.... I have a morbid fascination to see what happens next and hope you take pity on your poor readers and give them a reason to hope that Louise eventually gets the better of sadist Ronald. Would be great to see the characters rounded out a bit more... they both are a bit one-dimensional, though maybe that's the intent of the story. I guess a part of me is still hoping to see something redeemable in Ronald... anything, actually. Excellent writing. Thanks for sharing.

i really am enjoying the series

Am I sick for liking "Joe"? I'm a woman, by the way. He's funny and sad and evil, but I like him.

Constructive criticism: You don't describe how SHE feels during the actual fucking part.

Wow this story is intense!