by TarnishedPenny
to launch your clothing into the sky and let it drift to who knows where?
You've got to hand it to Katie, as Duncan did, and enjoy Nude Day to its fullest.
Good luck in the contest.
I have worked with weather balloons in the past - sometimes, it can be intriguing to determine which way they will go - where the wind does blow. Also, in hilly terrain, that same wind can blow in ANY direction. I found the tale to be INTRIGUING, to say the least! Wish my name was Duncan.....
I loved everything about this. A smart, inventive, self assured female lead. A kind, respectful masculine character. An interesting premsie, well plotted. Just great.
Excellent story. Just the right tone and good pacing. Erotic but not overdone. The writing is wonderful. One of the best exhibitionist stories I've read.
Congratulations on your contest win! This was a terrific story with quite an interesting premise, and I enjoyed it very much indeed.
Because I got to read this story. What an amusing premise. It was excellently paced, the characters well developed, the writing natural and yet balanced with a unique sort of flavor.
Please do keep writing, the site is that much better for you being on it.
Congratulations, it was well deserved. Do forgive me if I end up gushing about your work again in an email.
Sorry that I couldn't vote for your story in the contest, but clearly you didn't need my vote. Thanks for the lovely story.
Happy that you won the competition. An erotic tale, very well thought out and executed... super.
Thank you for writing this. Another chapter for a happily ever after would be great.
Everything about this story is great. The mental game she plays. The physical payoff. Just fantastic! !
Cleanly written, warm and erotically satisfying.
Extra points for intelligent protagonists with normally proportioned organs.
If the rest of your work is as good, i'm a fan.
wonderful.
It seems to me the story parallels exhibitionism itself. Societal mores have us nervous about our own skin even as we find excitement in it, and underneath all that bs it's just our skin.
Kate had that nervousness and played a calculated game of tag with society and her own fear, and at the same time really felt the freedom of being in her own skin.
Add Duncan and we had a new round of nervousness about expectations, and in the end still came down to just people enjoying being in their skin.
A wonderful story, sexy and erotic, and excellent storytelling. Thank you.
The BEST story I've ever read on this website. Very well written, with intelligent wording that holds your interest. Superb! I eagerly await other stories by this terrific author. Are there other stories on this website or somewhere else?
I fell in love with Duncan. I imagined him as Sam Elliott - masculine, easy going, gentlemanly. Thank you for this lovely story! It'll keep me company all day today!
I appreciate your kind words, all of you.
Yes, I have other stories here. Simply go to the top of the story page and click on my name. I do hope you like them.
I can see why it won first prize. Great job.
Thank you for sharing the story here.
Now I'll have to read the rest of your works.
It's a wonderful story to read; well written and to good to stop reading!
Best I Have read on this site. Wish I could be her. So adventurous , creative.
As a fellow nudist of some years now, you took me back to my
fist days, the excitement of peeling off the last article and barering
all, Blissful.
Absolutely Perfect story!
Thanks, and you earned the #1 spot without question.
RiverViewGuy
i had a hard on the whole time i read this story. I wish i could have done the same thing. Love being nude outdoors and the excitement of being caught, gives great strong orgasms. letting your clothes launch away makes you stay nude longer and give you more excitement and a, in my case a hard on longer, while searching for the bag of clothes.
Great story, really tapping into one of my fantasies. I wish I was brave enough to do this.
I spent the entire story edging. You have a way with words, and the climax, so to speak, was not just sexy as hell, but also quite beautiful. I've added you to my favorites, and plan to read many of your stories, which have such incredibly high scores.
I was reading this story and realized that this story reads like it actually happened. The details, the pacing, and things you commented on would only occur to someone that had actually experienced these things. Plus, your personal profiles says you're finally with someone after all these years, which fits what you described in the story.
Being male, it made me wish I was able to experience from your female perspective. I got hard from both sides of the story.
Real or not, well done.
There's nothing like being dangerously far away from one's clothes to invite turn-on and orgasm. What I wouldn't do, and have done, to get that feeling.
Penny, I read your story around 5 months ago, and I found it very stimulating at the time - in more than one way. One of the best I can remember. Your writing seems very prolific, voluminous, and capable. I was inspired enough by you to write on here myself. And my third story recently, is maybe somewhat akin to your's. I was wondering sometime, if you might view and comment your opinion on it? It's called 'Naked: The First Time - and Forever', same category.
That was truly delightful. By indulging in her desires and abilities it led her to a man she could enjoy and in such a lovely setting. Having enjoyed nude wilderness camping I could relate to how she felt, you expressed it so well. Well summer is fast approaching, time to go find those wild natural places again.