All Comments on 'Up North Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
a very big ""Nice"".!!**

Great story and very different ~~ but sometimes different is nice in a good way.!*

Brings back memories of my Mother & Grand-Mother & my two Sisters & I make 5..!!

lol

Good times on the Farm & the only way to go.!

You got a 100% from me & an "A+" all the way.

TYVM

JAG

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
i luv it!!!!!

nothing on earth like cumming in mommy!!!! keep it up m8!!!

happybetahappybetaalmost 10 years ago
More than I bargained for

I had decided to read a story on while on my break at work. Now I'm really struggling to keep my hands away from my crotch.

It was a great story, really descriptive; it felt like I was there in the room with them! Dialogue was great , too! Thanks for writing! Hopefully I can make it another 6 hours, but that's my problem, right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
If we could we would

You are absolutely right!! If we (male or female) could eat ourselves we would. I'm just not that limber, damn it!!

Great story and story telling!!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 10 years ago
loved it!

Great story telling! You have a way with words and can completely paint a scene so it seems like you were there in the room. I was worried at the beginning that this was going to be a son raping mom type of violent story. As that does nothing for me, I was glad to see the son go back to being a good character. Can't wait til the next chapter with the mom/son/aunt threesome!

dragonwriterdragonwriterover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks so much!

Dear Anonymous, thanks for reading my story from start to finish. Your thoughtful commentary is always appreciated - DW

YourLinkYourLinkalmost 6 years ago
Love your story. Big 5 Stars!

This is a great chapter, but just one question. What happened to Grandpa?

firemanlitfiremanlitalmost 6 years ago

"This is a great chapter, but just one question. What happened to Grandpa?"

Those 2 hussies screwed him to death. But he died with a smile on his face

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