by dreampilot79
Good job of working the balloon ride aspects into the storyline. Could have used a little more editing, but still a fun read.
Rumple Foreskin
Sweet! Nice romance, nice characters, nice group sex! Well done! Now my question is, do you really have a balloon? I've always wanted a ride.
Too bad I'm scared of heights. lol But the sex part was a definite yes. Good luck!
Nice idea and some good twists. Seemed more serially monogamous than group sex at times.
Great idea! the sex was so sizzling hot! Loved it! great job dp!
It had a few technical problems, and a few run-on lines but I really liked the plot, the characters and the style.
I went ahead and dropped a 5 bomb... so good luck!
Can't wait for my next balloon ride. Come on springtime. Excellent story and very hot.