All Comments on 'Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 04'

I haven't read the other story; I'm intrigued. However, don't stop! I am really enjoying the writing. Keep it up!

First of all, you are doing a great job in developing the characters and storyline. Keep up the good work.

Next, yes, there are some similarities to your story and that of Kita'thallia and you are wise to not read any more of that story so as to not influence yourself in the development of your story. That being said, remember, similar themes exist in all sorts of literature. There is a story I read on here about a machine that allowed someone to see back in time and also to "watch" what was going on anywhere at any time. This is very similar to a story by Arthur C Clark, but I am enjoying it here as well. Develop your story and keep going without fear. You are doing great and I want to continue the adventure. I will tell you now that there is already enough of a difference between yours and the Kita story that you need to keep going. I love the development and interaction of the four characters you have created and look forward to seeing where you will take them.

Best of luck and keep going!

I'm enjoyed every chapter and looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

Great story...more more...driving my furry desires nuts...

Really enjoy this story. Keep it up. Hit wrong button on my vote way to low.

It is such a pleasure to read something that is well plotted, well written, and well edited.

Have you written for other venues?

I keep checking everyday for a new chapter. This is fantastic!!!!!!

Each chapter seems better than the last.

Sweet........ Baby.......... Jesus!!!!!!! How can one story be SO FREAKING GOOD?!?! This story is like true literature. I can clearly see the environment, inhabitants and all sorts of things based on your wonderful descriptions! If your story was crack, I'd be a damned addict! To hell with a five, I give this story a f-ing TEN!

great story, however I think you should add at least one sex story in each of the chapters. Also some more furry inhabitants could join from the other island

Amazing story 10/10

1. Yes, it is similar to Kita'thalla, but, honestly, there are some pretty distinct and noticeable differences, chief among them the 'multiple females' bit.

2. I DON'T FUCKING CARE HOW CLOSE IT IS, KEEP WRITING.

Also, I doubt you'd be in danger of having your plot 'crossed' with Kita'thalla's in any way.

THEY still haven't fucked yet, while Liam 'Lucky Bastard' Carter here has already done the deed, and has two more lined up for him.

MOAR.

AI NEEDZ MOAR.

Great story can not wait for further adventures of the four and how they develop as a family

This story is without a doubt the best piece of sci-fi/adventure/action/erotica ive ever read. Drawn to the story and character development and it truly feels like a story rather than smut with a splash of backstory. KEEP THESE CHAPTERS COMING!!!!!!

Dude "Clotilda"!? Seriously! You couldn't have just called her 'Klat' or something? She sounds like a medical condition now.

Anyhoo, great story so far. Love all the little details. Love the little sex-obsessed kitten. Now, onwards to next chapter...

So this was a good chapter. I liked the combat and the exploration of cultural differences. i realized I forgot to mention I'm still a bit confused about the tree trunk they are living in. Is it like 4-5 feet tunnel inside?

was the second wife of the Frankish king Clovis I, and a princess of the kingdom of Burgundy

still rated 5 star in my book.

Good story and really not that close to Kita'thallia. Clotilda is one of the three fates. Keep writing!

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Loving it

JC

A chapter or two ago, when he was first looking for shorter names for the women, I thought "he should call the short one Clotilda!"

So I was quite pleased when he reached the same conclusion!

i am really enjoying this story you have created with all the details and cultural norms you have true talent

What more needs said?

J

I have officially decided that the cats speak with a Khajiit accent and pronunciation

I concur with your statement. Khajiit accents abound!

My third time through this masterpiece.

However, whenever I see the name Clotilda, I wince and want to close the device. Horrid, truly horrid.

I know your feelings. Their original names are just three syllables, don't see the problem with them personally.

The name Clotilda certainly did not pass a focus group test! I even hate to read it and it sounds ugly.

I might use it on a slave, servant, or family member I disinherited, but never on a wife, mistress, girlfriend, or daughter.

Good story! I struggle with the Khajiit like names, Clotilda is an odd choice. It is not much easier to pronounce. I wish you had stuck with Elle.

Clotilda is pretty dumb choice. Not at all easier than her original one.

Also, kinda weird you'd name her after the last known slave ship to come to America.

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Your story and Kita'thalla may have similar tones but no worries, things are different enough that yours is for sure your own.

Love the story!

I like it.

People are people, wherever they're from.... Keep them adventures coming. Thank you.🙏🏼🌸