All Comments on 'Upper Kek Valley'

A very good start on a new journey toward a new life. Please keep writing either of your two stories because both are very good. Please keep writing.

Michael JOhnn

Thanks for the encouragement. I'm glad to see that people actually like things I've written. I'll have a new story up in a few days, but I don't think I can continue the two I have out now as they weren't meant to have more than one part.

Seems to jump in a little fast but still like it

I like the ideas you put here, and would suggest looking at fleshing out the first half before the sex. That would build up the romance and the anticipation and create more depth to the character. I've written down ideas before, then rewrote them later to add the additional scenes in a second version. Fatten up the story bit by bit.

But then I like to tease and make people wait before getting to the sex. *evil grin*