by Carmenno
Haven't seen you in a while! Great to have you back! The story's definitely getting more interesting, too.
Still, can't argue with the results.
Could use a little more detail and fleshing out. Character introductions, motivations etc.
But all in all, not a bad effort.
I can get behind noncon and mind control but this fic is just fucked up. It sees like she is being brain damaged. Not ok with this plot.
This story is amazing, made me wet and horny, I love it! I enjoy watching her transform into a slutty bimbo, please keep writing!
This is delightful! A story about a dry, frigid, over-educated, almost sexless modern woman turning herself into a hot, sexy piece of girl candy. A five star story!
I look forward to a sequel...what happens to our sweet 'n' steamy little sexpot?