All Comments on 'Uptight Annie Ch. 02'

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GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinabout 7 years ago

Haven't seen you in a while! Great to have you back! The story's definitely getting more interesting, too.

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallabout 7 years ago
Almost three years between part one and part two

Still, can't argue with the results.

Could use a little more detail and fleshing out. Character introductions, motivations etc.

But all in all, not a bad effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Why tho

I can get behind noncon and mind control but this fic is just fucked up. It sees like she is being brain damaged. Not ok with this plot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing

This story is amazing, made me wet and horny, I love it! I enjoy watching her transform into a slutty bimbo, please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ideal Transformation

This is delightful! A story about a dry, frigid, over-educated, almost sexless modern woman turning herself into a hot, sexy piece of girl candy. A five star story!

I look forward to a sequel...what happens to our sweet 'n' steamy little sexpot?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sequel

Can we expect a sequel any time soon?!

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