All Comments on 'Urban Renewal'

by randibyrnes

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ariesgirlariesgirlabout 10 years ago

I'm glad she finally stopped wallowing in self pity.

I wanted to know Brad's side of the breakup. The evidence of the messages and pics made him look guilty but I wanted to get the whole scoop.

racoon1174racoon1174about 10 years ago
Short but not to short, Sexy and Sweet

As a gardener it was interesting to see someone use that as a major plot line not once but twice. It's nice to see something other then Special Forces, Mustangs, Lawyers etc. Nice sex scenes especially the solo action. I'd love to see a Toys and Masturbation story from you sometime soon. Thanks for the read.

LeFrog08LeFrog08about 10 years ago
Nicely done...

Very romantic with interesting characters but I was distracted by the meals menus:

I'm not vegan and every "veggie" meal description had me salivating for a rare steak. And pizza without pepperoni or bacon? No, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
dream

a old mans dream story. good dream for him.

bgmisfunbgmisfunabout 10 years ago
Pretty Damn Good

Very believable and likable characters. And hot sex scenes too.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
Great Piece Of Writing*****

Very entertaining and very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing a great read.

magic10fingers4magic10fingers4about 10 years ago
Such a great flow to the story

Pure enjoyment with no rush - and the narration was so well done! Yea for older men and younger women!

I hope you write more! Five does not do it justice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I don't know man

I prefer romance stories between similar age group people. Not between a grandpa and a 20 something woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I agree with the previous commentator. Just a preference. Nothing wrong with the story line or anything

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Thank you for the comments, hope to submit more often in the coming months. Sorry, I don't send out pictures. Thanks for reading and voting. Randi