All Comments on 'Use Her'

"Their" and "They're". One of them is a contraction of "They" and "Are", as in "They Are reading your story and wondering why you keep using "They're" instead of the (correct) "THEIR", and they think you're an idiot."

Ria is a woman I'd like to meet.

Alwaystaboo

Your story is interesting, but it's compromised by grammar problems, making it harder to read than it could be.

Your story is great these grammar assholes are just that assholes. This story was great! You should defenitly make a part 2

I hardly ever vote below a 4, so that is what I did here. This is not for the grammar or word usage, though those could stand some work. The story is just not my cup of tea. Even a glory hole is more erotic to me because of the unknown factor. Keep writing, and have fun with it.

Sorry.

There are some women that get off on this kind of action. That, I can understand.. I have known a couple of gals that go for this.

Are so much fun, I love them.