by sharkandpen
I liked the complexity of the characters. The sex scenes were quite nice as well. Good job and I'm hoping for a sequel.
but I must admit, the misspelling of 'thru' is distracting, especially since there are no other spelling or grammatical errors in the piece... Character development is strong, and the plot is moving along nicely.
It got better and better as it progressed. I would think the next part will be very exciting and full of more intrigue.
the heading says it all!!! make the ending soon..... =0)