All Comments on 'Using My Slave with My Boyfriend'

This was the first story of yours I have read and gave you 5-stars for your work. Good character build, kept it focused and exciting and open for follow-on, should you desire. I will read your others as well. Thank you for writing and sharing your stories - very enjoyable.

Honestly, the writing was off. Constant strange terms that didn't match context. The woman "noticed" the penetration? And I get trying things like "she rippled to the floor" but too often here they just didn't work.

The action is hot but the language is off-kilter.

A really enjoyable story. It's great that you've let us guys into your rancid kinky world too! I love the sheer passionate nastiness of the whole thing - "Fuck the dirty ass cunt of my slave whore." Wow you obviously enjoy having a foul mouth as much as us guys and it's wonderful sharing the rancid pleasure with you. (Cunt is a very tasty word) Red hot and very satisfying to read

Oh Holy…..!

This was extremely erotic and arousing…..

Orgasmic!